Tuesday poem: We are all working our way up, towards the birds
June 14, 2015
We are all working our way up, towards the birds
We are all working our way up, towards the birds.
Outliers like Icarus, 70s pterodactyl hanggliders,
twitchers and breeders of weird coloured parrots:
they have all felt the urge and responded
to the best of their beakless capacities.
But they are not the neo-orno avant-garde.
The egg must come first, before the flight —
putting aside philosophy, that is just true.
So who is nature’s true Anna Wintour?
Where is the next Paris to be found?
The catwalk of the world is spiked by echidna.
Platypus pouts there too. (That is hard with a bill.)
These two are the fashion-forward models,
who will soon sprout wings and launch and fly;
it is happening now, as I type and you read.
Placenta will be ditched, like yesterday’s rags.
Next year, unaided flight will be de rigueur,
and song will erupt, without instruments,
deep from the gape of seven billion throats.
We are all working our way up, towards the birds.
P.S. Cottier
This poem was recently highly commended in the Interstellar Award for Speculative Poetry. Fellow Tuesday Poet (and lovely person/editor) Tim Jones was placed second with a poem that blends the speculative and the political, and Kevin Gillam (who may be lovely, for all I know, but who lives in Western Australia, which is much further away than New Zealand, at least psychologically) was awarded first place with a fascinating work that demands several readings. (A little like that monstrous sub-clausey sentence, but much much better.) You can read their poems and the detailed judge’s report here. This was the second thing I was highly commended/shortlisted/close-but-no-cigared for in the last fortnight! I won’t bore on about the other one though, as I don’t want to publish that poetry here just yet.
If you like humorous, short poetry, I promise that some will be read at Manning Clark House on 24th June at 7.30pm. I hear there will also be some quite angry stuff, and, of course, some speculative poetry. That’s by me; I have no idea if Mark Tredinnick writes any of that sort of thing. (He is the other reader.)
Come along to 11 Tasmania Circle and find out. Also; wine.
Read the works of the other Tuesday Poets around the world by pressing here.
Oh, I love this one, Penelope, congratulations. (I can’t wait to be there, either, with the birds!)
Thanks Michele! The idea of the echidna and platypus as fashion icons amused me.
I like this poem a lot and it has one of the best titles for a poem ever! All the best for the reading, too (and thanks for the kind words).
I still have a week before the reading. Lots of time. I like to get slightly worked up and tipsy.
The title is almost as long as the poem.
Congratulations on your Interstellar success, Penelope. I enjoyed the poem.
Thank you, Helen.
The Tuesday poets looks an interesting gathering. My only blog is here at WordPress, so I won’t be likely to tune in there, but it looks a grand thing. Best luck with it and your writing. Cheers,
Frank
Thank you Frank! The official group wound up late last year, but I am keeping the habit of posting every Tuesday.