Tuesday poem: Fourth in a long series of nasty little poems
May 16, 2016
Death to all poetry gardens!
In my garden I grow hebetude
just near the wistfulsteria.
The nodding fields of dilligafs
raise two-petal fingers,
yellowed with gorgeous nicotine.
(They hate the word roseate,
beloved of neat poetry gardeners.)
Then the rose ate the budgie,
and westringia strangled the cat.
P.S.Cottier

Looks a tad roseate to me
I’ve become heartily sick of a certain type of Very Nice Poem which moves too easily between description of nature as a mere pretty thing and the poet’s (often fairly tedious) personal reflections. Doesn’t mean I won’t write one again, but I will slap myself with a tulip as I do so.
In June I will be attempting to write a poem a day at another site; more on that soon. I’ll also keep posting at least once a week here. So now I’m off to tend the worm-poem farm, to help with the fervid compostition.
Next week: Less puns.
Tee hee. Liked this one. Dilligafs may need an explanatory note for international readers?
Do I Look Like I Give A Fuck? Not directed at you, Sean! I didn’t realise that it was an Oz expression, particularly.
And obviously I was channelling Wordsworth.
I always thought it was a Kevin”Bloody” Wilson thing? Maybe I’m wrong