Budgies and shortlisting

October 1, 2024

Budgerigar

Ten million green commas punctuate blue sky,
quick breaths of swooping wonder, multiplied.
Water-hole is your target; liquid rope pulls you down
and the whole emerald sky is falling, diving,
as miniature bodies scoop into pool.
Your individual markings have taken you
further than native flight; outside the Louvre
I saw you, cold, trying to break in, as pointillist
as Pissarro but acrylic in your finish.
A proud but damp escapee from French balcony,
regretting the lost seed and the found liberty.
So plump and fresh, I have heard you were good eating,
a winging fast food charred to a turn;
as far from stringy battery chook as fingers in the fire.
Most know you singly; whistling in cages,
bowing and bobbing, rattling plastic mirrors.
Driven mad you ring and ring chink-chinky bells
or make love to that hard, hard-to-get reflection.
What joy to see you
just once, as you swoop,
one stitch amongst the tapestry,
a blade of grass in feathered turf carpet, magically landing,
transforming dreary waterside with that fallen sward of Eire.
Swift dragon of twenty million wings,
fluorescing with your simple, beak-filled joys.

PS Cottier

I have just returned from Boulia, in Queensland, about 300 km from Mount Isa, where I finally saw budgies in the wild. These have been my main target bird for ages, but they’ve always avoided me. We also saw wild cockatiels, which was wonderful.

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In less ornithological news, I have two works shortlisted in separate national competitions. Firstly, my book Tuesday’s Child is Full (In Case of Emergency Press) is shortlisted for the Society of Women Writers (NSW) Book Awards for Poetry. This one is announced at a ceremony Sydney in late November.

Secondly, The Thirty-One Legs of Vladimir Putin, a novella manuscript co-written with NG Hartland, has been shortlisted for the 20/40 prize, run by publishers Finlay Lloyd. The main prize for this one is publication, so it will be a very exciting announcement later this month.

4 Responses to “Budgies and shortlisting”

  1. nounouhead's avatar nounouhead said

    CONGRATULATIONS! Beautiful poem – very ideophonic. The caged budgie is tragic. You published my poem ‘All the Seasons in Your Face’ in Canberra Timea 2019. It was about Duke and he has passed – 3 weeks ago. A stalwart, loving, courageous empathic soul, he gave me 15 years of his life – he was a reascue. What service! Vale Duke.

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  2. Geoffrey Aitken's avatar Geoffrey Aitken said

    Travelling by road to Perth My now wife and I were stopped and roadsided when an enormous flock of the green/blue variety stormed a water hole within reach of the highway[?]. I still have photos somewhere. Loved the poem. Congratulations on the listings. Extremely difficult to come by. Well done.

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